Porcelain Angel

This may or may not go into the story itself it is just a random blurb that came to mind because my characters enjoy ruining my sleep. i have noticed ...

Wow this made me want to cry a little bit. You can feel the love and in the very beginning it seems kinda like the speaker is being ignored by ...

Yeah, I kinda forgot about the 'edit' feature when I posted that, thanks though. Its okay all critiques are welcomed and I am open to anything, specially the bashing of ...

I remembered trying to impress my old man, I think that instead of a comma you could use a period to give a bit of finallity to the statement. The ...

Teacher: Where is your assignment Student: *holds up tiny wad of paper* Here is part of it, I'll get the rest of it when my washer finally coughs it up ...

Thank you for the reviews...*goes off to work on suggestions*

wow, this is beautiful. I love the detail and how you drew the reader into the party. This particular piece is written with enough detail to be wonderfully declicious with ...

I had a bit of an issue figuering out which of the girls was talking and when, and some of the descriptions were a bit choppy. I did notice one ...

I have one pet, a psychotic cat and I am into just about everything. ^_^ um my profile actually has most of my interest up anything more specific feel free ...

Thank you so much for the warm welcome. Rubric: Favorite Genre-Fantasy Strength: Details Weakness: Details ( I use too many) I've always been a writier, I learned to read when ...

Bathory Stevey Solis Her azure eyes fluttered open as streams of warm sunlight fell across her face. Around her lay beer-bottles, pizza boxes, comatose revelers and one-night stands. All of ...

I enjoyed this throughly, scared me a good deal ( and I was raised on horror so not much phases me.) The only thing I had an issue with was ...

Hi, I found this site through Yahoo and thought it looked like fun so I joined up. I have been looking for a good writers group to join and this ...